Thursday, June 14, 2018

Moon Beams Comments

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Moon beams

You feel away and you are close,
Looking at me in a joyless eye,
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Riza Braholli
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Savita Tyagi 21 September 2018

A very beautiful and tender poem on love. It’s a pleasure to read your poems. Also I thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.

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Luz Hanaii 01 July 2018

I'm out of words, just Gorgeous! I bet your wife loved this. She must be so proud of you and your love.

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Riza Braholli 02 July 2018

Luz thank you. I read my note to my wife and thank you too!

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Bharati Nayak 27 June 2018

A tender poem of love.....most beautifully expressed are different hues of love- - from 'hurt' to 'happiness- -It touches heart in rhyming ways.'.Thanks for sharing.Let me quote- - At your eye wrinkle, where tears drain, I do feel guilty, myself I blame, So I keep silent in sacred pain, If I do cry, I won't feel shame.

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Riza Braholli 28 June 2018

thank you Bharati!

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