Saturday, May 18, 2019

Moon And Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surrounded by darkness
Overlooking billions of lives
Wars, love, tears, laughs
Oh, how lifeless I've felt
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Asavri Dhillon
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Amarjit Ghumman 16 September 2019

Strength is light which inspiring us to live life .... Nice poem

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Michael Hopkins 18 May 2019

We are the Light in the darkness expressing ourselves in words. Lovely poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 May 2019

A lovely and wonderful poem, dear Ma'am Asavri.....10+++++++++

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Asavri Dhillon

Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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