Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Moon And Stars Comments

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deep in the darkness there is a light
even for a vampire
light is ayour friend and family
t he people that care for you
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Aubrey Silver
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 May 2009

This can be a beautiful poem, but you have to correct some mistakes so people can read your poems with ease. I am giving you good advice, my friend. HL

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