Monday, May 7, 2012

Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look outside at the moon tonight,
it is shining white so bright.
Blushing in front of sun it runs,
as it is the pillar of domination.
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Shubham Koul
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2015

It is the symbol of peace and love. It is the study for an explorer. It is the spirit for a traveler and an inspiration for a writer..- .. a great write and wonderful imagination... thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2015

An excellent tribute to our night visitor

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Aditi Khandelwal 14 May 2012

I like everything about the moon.. And the way you describe it is equivalent to starring at the moon... Beautiful poem Aditi: D

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Shubham Koul

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