Thursday, July 2, 2009

Moon Comments

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One night the moon said to me
'If he makes you cry, then why dont you leave him? ? ? '
I Paused for a moment,
Then asked 'Moon, would you ever leave
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Jazmin Baird
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One night the moon said to me 'If he makes you cry, then why dont you leave him? ? ? ' I Paused for a moment, Then asked 'Moon, would you ever leave your sky? ? '.... inseprable part of life... can not exist independently... beautiful write..... read mine cry not and moon

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rago rago 02 July 2009

a brilliant write ............ well penned cute brief and best.........

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