Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 28, 2009

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Rating: 4.9

As I was bidding bye to mother,
Found there shining object other,
Mom was waving hand in smile,
I was stunned and amused for while,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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A beautiful poem about Moon Mother, . 'I conveyed her to rise slowly, beautiful object ruling only, movement slow with gentle walk, whispering in ears with smile and talk'. 10 Karin

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Merna Ibrahim 16 October 2009

Superb poem as usual...the rhyme is marvelous! ! thanks for your comment.10s

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Sulochna Pandit 15 September 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, Found there shining object other, Mom was waving hand in smile, I was stunned and amused for while,

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Jigisha Vyas 19 August 2009

it is inspring object always, , , ,10

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Kunwar Patel 14 August 2009

grat inspirational love object....10

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Radha Seth 13 August 2009

very very good poem and inspiring one....10

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Saroj Davde 13 August 2009

it is very good poem....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 12 August 2009

very good poem of the time....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 11 August 2009

lovely poem of the day....10

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Vinod Karmakar 10 August 2009

very lovely poem indeed...10

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Ketan Rajgor 10 August 2009

moon is really a symbol of love...10

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Ratna Patel 09 August 2009

lot of inspiration from moonass object....10

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Suresh Vakil 08 August 2009

embodiment of love cool atmosphere....10

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Rupa Shah 08 August 2009

very very good and lovely....10

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Chaul Vania 08 August 2009

inddedd very good poemand interesting....10

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Argum Sheth 07 August 2009

very god and thoughtful poem....10

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Dalsukh S 05 August 2009

very good poem and very inspirational...10

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Jayant Manik 03 August 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, inspirational object....10

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G Kandoi 03 August 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, Found there shining object other, Mom was waving hand in smile, it is source of inspiration....10

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Pradip Pillai 31 July 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, Found there shining object other, Mom was waving hand in smile, I was stunned and amused for while, beautiful metaphor used in poem...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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