Moon Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Moon

Rating: 4.9


As I was bidding bye to mother,
Found there shining object other,
Mom was waving hand in smile,
I was stunned and amused for while,

Why I was feeling so cool?
Did I loose nerves and looked fool?
Dark was disappearing with her show,
Silver lines were coming in flow,

I had mixed feeling and joy,
Mom in sky and moon enjoy,
Was a thought simple rejoice?
Gentle touch with low voice,

Moon was slowly emerging,
Stars darkened with rays shining,
I wanted to measure her dark patches,
With imaginary painting and colourful catches,

I conveyed her to rise slowly,
Beautiful object ruling only,
Movement slowly with gentle walk,
Whispering in ears with smile and talk,

I want to share happiness,
All goodness to isolate loneliness,
Belongingness found in oneness,
Is it not said in pure greatness?

I continue to hold lenient view,
Look for solace and advice for few,
Your are my symbol for peace,
With silver linings and mind at ease.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Radha Seth 13 August 2009

very very good poem and inspiring one....10

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Saroj Davde 13 August 2009

it is very good poem....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 12 August 2009

very good poem of the time....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 11 August 2009

lovely poem of the day....10

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Vinod Karmakar 10 August 2009

very lovely poem indeed...10

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A beautiful poem about Moon Mother, . 'I conveyed her to rise slowly, beautiful object ruling only, movement slow with gentle walk, whispering in ears with smile and talk'. 10 Karin

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Merna Ibrahim 16 October 2009

Superb poem as usual...the rhyme is marvelous! ! thanks for your comment.10s

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Sulochna Pandit 15 September 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, Found there shining object other, Mom was waving hand in smile, I was stunned and amused for while,

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Jigisha Vyas 19 August 2009

it is inspring object always, , , ,10

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Kunwar Patel 14 August 2009

grat inspirational love object....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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