Mere amorphous dust in permanent suspension,
in mid-air, nearest to earth and the earth
of your soul MAN, I'm an emissary of some
higher order.What's left of daylight, at night
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Another excellent write Very encompassing and wonderful description of this wonder of nature; moon. Its mysteries, beauty and wonders have been painted brilliantly on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Another poetic gem, Sir Yoonoos. To my Poem List.
First of all, thanks for inviting me to read this poem, Moon is one of my favourite subject. I find it an articulate poem.10++
Wow this is one of your masterpieces as you describe the moon brilliantly in a scientific poetic way that delights my lunarlover heart. Kudos for this great poem. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '
Magnificent! And I come away with a realization that perhaps little in the universe is 'mere'. A great work, Yoonoos.
Moon is the eternal bridge that joins the earthlings and the Highland above. Wise concept. A nice heart-warming write
These words about the moon are certainly denoting the particularities of the satellite.but " of your soul MAN, I'm an emissary of somehigher orde" r....10
A thought provoking write, thank you for sharing. I like the phrase, What's left of daylight... it makes you think deep.
I love your poem. So in touch with the moon phases. Beautifully written...10
Great imagery. Beautifully crafted poem on the moon. Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing.
The beauty of the moon concisely captured. Interesting reading
An outstanding poem on Moon, dear Poet Yoonoos. I love the line - " I whirl in the dance of eternal balance" Moon is the most mystical of all the cosmic wonders. Enjoyed reading this brilliant poem....10
uniquely composed on the characteristics of the MOON and its effect on the mind of imaginative there the moon from the shapeless dust, wind, earth, souls, dark night and through the light expresses its happiness there the moon discloses as the cool heart of the earth and keep its dwellers in surviving lovely weather more than the hot sun there the moon composes the mind of happy with sorrow as the cosmic magnetic power......10++
A lovely look at the elegant moon, full of splendour and glamour with your eclectic feelings reflected in words...
A wonderful write of our close relation in flight......well penned