Sunday, May 31, 2020

Moon Comments

Rating: 4.8

Mere amorphous dust in permanent suspension,
in mid-air, nearest to earth and the earth
of your soul MAN, I'm an emissary of some
higher order.What's left of daylight, at night
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Tom Allport 18 July 2020

A wonderful write of our close relation in flight......well penned

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 July 2020

Another excellent write Very encompassing and wonderful description of this wonder of nature; moon. Its mysteries, beauty and wonders have been painted brilliantly on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Another poetic gem, Sir Yoonoos. To my Poem List.

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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

First of all, thanks for inviting me to read this poem, Moon is one of my favourite subject. I find it an articulate poem.10++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2020

Wow this is one of your masterpieces as you describe the moon brilliantly in a scientific poetic way that delights my lunarlover heart. Kudos for this great poem. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '

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Mj Lemon 29 June 2020

Magnificent! And I come away with a realization that perhaps little in the universe is 'mere'. A great work, Yoonoos.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 June 2020

Moon is the eternal bridge that joins the earthlings and the Highland above. Wise concept. A nice heart-warming write

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Joseph Sakyiamah 17 June 2020

Beautifully written ... love it all amazing

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These words about the moon are certainly denoting the particularities of the satellite.but " of your soul MAN, I'm an emissary of somehigher orde" r....10

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Seema Chowdhury 12 June 2020

A thought provoking write, thank you for sharing. I like the phrase, What's left of daylight... it makes you think deep.

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Navarun Mallick 12 June 2020

Beautiful work. I loved it

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Simone Inez Harriman 10 June 2020

I love your poem. So in touch with the moon phases. Beautifully written...10

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Emeka Williams Etumnu 09 June 2020

Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up pal

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2020

Great imagery. Beautifully crafted poem on the moon. Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing.

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Kingsley Egbukole 07 June 2020

The beauty of the moon concisely captured. Interesting reading

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An outstanding poem on Moon, dear Poet Yoonoos. I love the line - " I whirl in the dance of eternal balance" Moon is the most mystical of all the cosmic wonders. Enjoyed reading this brilliant poem....10

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Michael Hopkins 05 June 2020

A beautifully penned poem my PH friend. Well done.

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Emmanuel Chibuike 05 June 2020

very nice poem sir, i really love it

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Felix Otiende 05 June 2020

Awesome article sir,

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 June 2020

uniquely composed on the characteristics of the MOON and its effect on the mind of imaginative there the moon from the shapeless dust, wind, earth, souls, dark night and through the light expresses its happiness there the moon discloses as the cool heart of the earth and keep its dwellers in surviving lovely weather more than the hot sun there the moon composes the mind of happy with sorrow as the cosmic magnetic power......10++

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Kishore Kumar Das 04 June 2020

A lovely look at the elegant moon, full of splendour and glamour with your eclectic feelings reflected in words...

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