Thursday, May 3, 2018

Moon Comments

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At night I face the moon.
The moon does not face me.
The moon seesmy every negativity,
But does not see its own stain.
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Jean Larson 03 May 2018

So good to see this heartfelt poem. Moving.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2018

The moon shines with great pride, But does not see my sadness. some poets would say the moon is very lonely....... so are we poets. i understand u when u write about loneliness in this world where there are so many...... thank u dear poet. tony

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Raj Swami 03 May 2018

Thank you so much for reading my poem I like your thoughtful comment 🙏

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