Moon Comments

Great write.. Enjoyed it.. Keep sharing..

The dream of moon is elusive and fascinating too Please read my poem Death of a moon it has 4 poems in series.10+++ for this lovely poem.

I like sky, I like moon Where they stay both. I like night I like moon light When they are growth. Thank you.

it's beautiful, the words you chose matched well with the chear starry night, simple is the night, full of serene light.

Good narration and rhyming

This is your best poem Salman.

Lovely poem. Your imagination and love for nature is simply beautiful Keep it up salman. Read poems and write poems. You will be a great poet one fine day In Shaa Allah.