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When the days turn dark and dreams take birth,
Shines a beauty o'er the tall, dark hills,
Which being a missionary from the heaven
Lightens our pious, blue earth.
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Nicely defined- wonderfully crafted i feel envy -When the days turn dark and dreams take birth, and-'m not among earth's cynical, cruel men. every line is flowing like river, every spell is powerfully defined thank you
awesome write at this age..................continue with poetry....nice
Brilliant piece penned beautifully........great imagery.......nicely done...10/10
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7/23/2025 9:01:54 AM # 1.0.0
a beautiful poem, you write so well.