Moods: Aquatic Undulations Comments

Mihaela, try to be simple, more specific, less abstract and avoid using pompous expressions. _____________________ A poem by Emily Dickinson (1830–86) : At half-past three a single bird Unto a silent sky Propounded but a single term Of cautious melody. At half-past four, experiment 5 Had subjugated test, And lo! her silver principle Supplanted all the rest. At half-past seven, element Nor implement was seen, 10 And place was where the presence was, Circumference between.

Brilliant write with superb choice of words that are captivating and mesmerizing, as you bring the reader on a enchanting spiritual journey of serenity of the presence of God and that Otherworld! !

Detached. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.