Saturday, September 30, 2006

Mood Swings Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hormones are playing tennis today
Minute by minute
It changes it's moods
Sometimes those swings they do hit hard
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suzan gumush
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Stacey Watts 07 August 2008

This is so me right now. I love the way you portrayed mood swings. Thank you for sharing it.

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Cephas Oluwaseyitan 07 November 2006

Good one. It addressed an issue that all can identify with.

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Anna Cellmer 04 November 2006

Well expressed I think we all feel this way some days :) So many emotions during a day so many moods sometimes the only we can say is to smile at the end from our selves, great poem

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Bob Oldfield 28 October 2006

Solid first line! Love the thought it conjures up! Good job with this... Bob

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Brian Dorn 04 October 2006

Suzan, I love the yo-yo reference... playful, yet visually potent. Well done! ! Brian

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I love it. Some great lines in there - Love all and Hate all are my favourites Esra.

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