Sunday, July 23, 2017

Monument Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a decorated landscape of thoughts
Colours that tinted well with numbness
A well polished face of illusion
A smile that speaks from a lost heart
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Nidhi Agrawal 23 July 2017

Beautiful poem. A well polished face of illusion. Colours that tinted well with numbness. Lovely imagery.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

A well polished face of illusion smiles here in this Earth and this is decorated by thoughts in landscape. From lost heart smile speaks. This provokes thoughts because monument of love is faded. Memorial breath is lost but still hopes are there for new horizons. Craft of love has carried the broken pillars. This poem is very emotional and carries grief due to lost situations. An amazingly drafted poem is shared from deep emotion....10

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