Monday, August 20, 2018

Monument Comments

Rating: 5.0

MONUMENT


When the blue far sky turned saffron and glowed in the dying twilight
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

With a broken heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you very much dear Edward. It's painful to have been ignored by the loved ones

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Valsa George 28 November 2018

So sad....! It is depressing to see a tree dying out! I liked the way you have described the tree in varying seasons and how it has played a hospitable host to all chirping birds and their fledglings! A lovely poem that deserves top marks!

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Parameswaran Nair (DPN) 29 November 2018

Thank you Dr.valsa George. Your encouraging comments really hail me to poeti heights. Thank you

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Prabha 30 September 2018

Shattered hopes...... they are painful.

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Yes Prabha, it's painful

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(DPN) 21 September 2018

Yes Devi Krishnakumar, It's the story not only of the tree but also is of those who give love and care

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Devi Krishnakumar 20 September 2018

Alas! The tree has become a monument. In fact it touches our heart.

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Chithra 17 September 2018

What an imagination sir

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