Saturday, September 6, 2008

Monty And Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its years since I open my mind,
To reality and living repeats,
However I feel in my shadow –
I saw more in child-blind view,
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Melissa Coventry
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Alison Cassidy 13 September 2008

A nostalgic personal poem about a difficult past being acknowledged and a more optimistic future begun. You poem tells me that you can't control the ocean, but you can learn to ride the waves. Your words '...the sun coaxing me to rise.' stood out for me. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Melissa Coventry

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