Monstrous Procreation Comments

Dr. Kardas, A true and frightening depiction of the mind-set of scientists who are clearly out of control (mostly for monetary profits!) rebelling against Our Creator and His natural laws... intruding in the realm of procreation belonging only to Him! Great poem showing the apparent irrationality by putting science at the center of things... showing its destructive and diabolical practices.10!

We all concur Dr. Kardas, that fortuitously the voiceless have ' their freedom of speech' through such a wise and talented liason as yourself. With gratitude, in the name of the unborn....continue to always be our spokeswoman, full of the Light and all gifts given by the Holy Spirit.

Dr. Kardas, This is superb moralistic interpretation of the evil of in vitro fertilization practices. This evil practice means that human beings enter the world no longer as gifts of God but as mere products of human evil engineering, as products that can be eliminated or accepted. NO LOGIC in such thinking! Thank you for shaking and enlightening our moral consciousness.10!

Shocking, but very truthful subject matter, masterfully expressed from the perspective of the unborn...doomed child. Last two stanzas really a knockout punch! ...what pitiful human irrationality: if wanted the embryo is human and is cause for great rejoicing, yet if unwanted...becomes just a despised piece of waste product! How true, is NOT GOD'S Perfect Love enough for us? 10+ Keep up the GOOD FIGHT!

Absolutely the best written poetic argument we've ever read! Please check our family's comment on 'Birth Announcement? '...we have the greatest respect for your keen insights and delivery of this message in the voice of the children who suffer this satanic abusive invention...the cry of each murdered child can be heard through your words loud and clear. Again, God bless..The Surrettes

I'm so angry at these practices...people who choose those practices are ignorant, plain cruel and selfish. How can they look at themselves in the mirror each morning? They must be telling themselves many BIG FAT LIES to be able to live with their guilt. We know they're listening to the devil! Thanks Dr.

Thank you Dr. Kardas for your dedication. Your poem sheds light upon a topic which many people take for granted these days...For they think 'scientifically' they are doing something wonderful...yet, they forget or choose to ignore God's Sacred Laws regarding conception. Very powerful words that I shall quote many times. May God bless you and keep guiding your unique talent to touch the hearts and souls of the many 'lost sheep' who strayed from God's Word. Rev.Sal

Thank you Dr. Kardas for your dedication. Your poem sheds light upon a topic which may people take for granted these days...For they think 'scientifically' they are doing something wonderful...yet, they forget or choose to ignore God's Sacred Laws regarding conception. Very powerful words that I shall quote many times. May God bless you and keep guiding your unique talent to touch the hearts and souls of the many 'lost sheep' who strayed from God's Word. Rev.Sal

Dr. Kardas, Another superb work, addressing the diabolic abuses of modern 'science' treating precious human life as a waste product! As you powerfully imply, this is the epitome of human cruelty, selfishness and stupidity: to kill some of their children to have a child? ! ! ! Love the extremely meaningful ending. INDEED, WE HAVE EVERYTHING BECAUSE WE HAVE GOD'S PERFECT LOVE. Thanks again!

very sensitive and expressive! ! ! Dear, friend. Could you read and comment on my “Javanese Poetry” likes Asmaradana (Love Song) , Balabak (Joke) , Dhandhanggula (Best Wishes) , Durma (Anger) , Gambuh (Education) , Girisa (Warning) , Jurudemung (Seduction) , Kinanthi (Womanhood) , Maskumambang (Manhood) , Megatruh (Sadness) , Mijil (Arise) , Pangkur (High Values) , Pucung (Wisdom) , Sinom (Youthful Song) , and Wirangrong (Majestic) , please? Could you read and comment too on my “Musical Poems” likes Ballade d'amour, Ballet Rosette, Bay Song, Capriccio Brillante, Cavatina Cabaletta, Children Song, Concerto “Pegasus”, Concerto 'Qilin', Divertimento Espressivo, Etude Magnifique, Garden Song, Harmonies poétiques, Intermezzo Misterioso, Lullaby, Mélodie Antique, Moderato Maestoso, Molto Cantabile, Morning Song, Nocturne fantastique, Prelude Scandalous, Rapsodie Chromatique, Rondo Dolce, Serenata con Grazia, Song To Society, Street Song, Symphony 'Dragon', Symphony 'Miko', and Toccata con Vivacità, please? Could you also read and comment on my last three poems like Lovely St Lucia! ! ! , Batik Java, and Jamu Java, please? Many thanks for your attention and support.

There is a bleak coldness about the whole thing.

woah, very insightful. it made me think. very good word choice too. and i especially love the last stanza.