Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Monsters Under The Bed Comments

Rating: 2.8

As I lay, in my warm Bed
All the Monsters run through my Head
Gruesome, Mean, Horrible, Things
I wonder what this night Brings?
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David Darbyshire
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Fluffy Unicorn123 18 February 2018

I love this poem so much- it's so good!

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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

David I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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Dee Daffodil 25 April 2006

No David...there are no monsters under your bed...or in your closet...or in the hallway...or in the bathroom...but yes...I will leave the light on anyway! This was a wonderful poem for kids (with dogs...) . I enjoyed it a lot.

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Ernestine Northover 31 January 2006

This would make a lovely children poem David, with the monsters and a dog. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Zahraa Song 31 January 2006

Once again, a very funny poem! ! ! Zainab. you do humour best!

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Mary Ann Najjar 31 January 2006

nice, suspense and quite funny poem.

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Not Long Left 31 January 2006

enjoyed This one Dave, it is something i am sure we have felt when we was children and maybe as adults! ! i wrote a poem very similar to this called 'night time Monsters' take a look and see what you think if you get the chance. all the best Vince

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Gina Onyemaechi 31 January 2006

Humorous piece of children's verse. Regards.

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