sounds and scratches on the floor, as muscles
tense from the sores.
they fester deep and cling real tight, haunting
taunting in the night
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moonsters in your poem are really alive through your sharp words And you can easily share the feeling with your audience.. Great job! !
eeeksss! ! ! ...like a Dracula movie it clings to the psyche.... probably it delivers a very potent and strong punch of realism..... as modern and as medieval as one wishes it to be.... great lines :)
Cassandra I like your uneque style.