Monday, October 26, 2009

' Monsters, Among Us... ' Comments

Rating: 2.7

Scatter The Creeping Vapor-Stench, Away
Expose The Wake of Eerie, Fog and Shadows
And Nightshade and Fiends, and Vile-Beasts That Bay
Begone, to Taboo, Grounds, Unhallowed …
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Moonbee I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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Moonbee Canady 22 July 2010

Thanks for reading this one Elena... It seemed to bring out the introspective in you (smile) ... and as for the question - what makes people 'monsters' is a simple answer ' Choice ' Everybody, whether they've had bad upbringing, a product of their environment or their way of thinking... has to make a Choice on what they do in life... (there is no excuse to take someone's life without lawful authority) ... I had already posted a poem dealing with this topic... Its called 'The Madness of A Murderer'... You might enjoy reading it and I assure you that if anyone who was a victim could talk, or the loved ones left behind, will agree with the term 'Monsters'... Our Hearts must change before the World Can Change... Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts - I appreciate them truly... MoonBee

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Elena Sandu 22 July 2010

Sometimes I wonder what makes those people- so called 'monsters'? Once, they all were lovely creatures(babies) at some point..what changed them? What did they sought? We find the answer, and that could change the world..(*_*)

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Catrina Heart 26 October 2009

Interesting innovative written craft...........Thanks...i loved it!

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