Sunday, June 26, 2016

Monsters Comments

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This world is creating monsters
Forming our children into the very thing we feared
Lurking below our beds.
The demons from the darkness are winning,
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 08 July 2016

Allowing them to run passed us. ..........i think you want past, as in the previous line. ? it's........its did i ever (EVER) claim to be an intelligent creature? ? another poem edging towards pessimism and depression! snap out of it. or is this just a trick to drive me to the wall? bri :)

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