Saturday, September 27, 2008

Monsters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear Father

I thought I would much like to crown you
with words that just need to be said
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Neil I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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David Threadgold 01 October 2008

A powerful piece of writing with a lot of emotion shown, and to be able to rhyme it was a bonus. Thanks for the read well done Get a 10 from me. Regards Dave T

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