Thursday, January 22, 2009

Monster You Created Comments

Rating: 3.0

Sitting in my dark corner, rocking myself.
Trying to wake this dormant heart of mine.
Memories of the pain shooting across my eyes.
Pain so vivid, so deep, so real.
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Lost Soul
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Ariel 05 June 2018

Wow I feel the pain I see the monster

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

strong imagery...to leave an indelibe mark on the mind

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Joseph Poewhit 22 January 2009

Poem comes across with some strong depth.

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Charles Chaim Wax 22 January 2009

powerful poem keep up the good work

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