Monster Inside Of Me Comments

Honest and truthful. If we all admitted to our own monsters, there would be a little less tension in our daily lives.

this was very good very dark but in a good way you have a great talent

Well written, Very honest and full of passion. We all have a little monster inside of us.(our ego) Sometimes it is really diffiuclt to control it and on and off it wins. I think all of us have been its little slave on and off But there is also a little angel (our soul) The more we learn to listen to the little angel the more we will turn our other cheek the better our lives will turn out to be.

Hey! This is simply Stupid. When someone hurts you, they are like in Fire. If you want to reciprocate the same, it is like fanning the Fire. Instead you should try to be passionate and loving towards her. It is like pouring water on Fire. It is simple logic which many don't understand. When someone shouts at you, you should immediately become cool. It is quenching fire with water. Never, Ever even be atrocious in poetic sense. No smoke without fire. Call yourself Kalm and Kool Kylee Bartz. You will become Calm and Cool. All the Best.

i understand that completely

i feel u, good writing