Tuesday, May 1, 2007

Monster Comments

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you've finally melted into what i hoped you were underneath.
and it's so messed up that i can only love in reaction to abuse,
i can only stay attached if i know i'm being used;
an outlet for anger or for input of lust,
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Ana Podarevska
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Daniel Partlow 01 May 2007

Sounds like your on the verge of giving up something worthwhile because you don't think you're worthy (I've read your other poetry which suggests this as well) . Don't make that mistake - stick it out. Check out my poem Divorce/El Nino. Be each other's better half. Good Luck. Dan

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Cellar Door 01 May 2007

I can relate to this.

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Ana Podarevska

Ana Podarevska

Kherson, Ukraine
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