Wednesday, October 26, 2011

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I long for it, I can't live without it.
With every morning that passes,
I die just a little more.
With every night I can't touch thee,
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Gavyn Krueger
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Brianna Winebarger 26 October 2011

I loved the way you descriped everything. It was simple, but complex. I love the line 'Eat away my heart until I see thee again. Until I can touch thee again. Until I can. Kiss thee again.' Perfection

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Brianna Winebarger 26 October 2011

Great. Beautiful. Splendid. Magic

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