Tuesday, May 3, 2011
Monsoons Are Yet To Come... Comments
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O! Do you remember the starless night?
When the moon was the only real, but strange thing,
I used to lie awake even after the moon would set,
and my sparkling eyes would capture a golden ring.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
03 May 2011
Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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7/20/2025 11:45:10 AM # 1.0.0
This poem has charm. I can feel the expectation lingering between the lines and your use of language creates strong images. A lovely piece of writing....well done!