Monsoon Song Comments

Yes, after summer this rainy season comes. This recovers us from hotness. We hail this season. Gaining health and good mind becomes our main motive. Nature beholds new grass. Trees dance in happiness in wet soil. Very nice and pleasing poem is composed and shared here is excellent poem on nature...10

a poem that is full of joyous excitement with the coming of the life giving and cleansing rain? ...........wonderfully written

Say, rain rain drop thick drop everywhere Kill the dry days, the devil days of summer.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Yes! ! ! ! And so spot on with the descriptive drt days, the devil days of summer. We get excited here when the sky spits some rain- -we think we are going to get the cooling effects of a windy wet storm- - ha! we no sooner notice the few drops of rain than it stops and the tiny dark cloud rows away and we stand there thinking about standing un the bathroom shower for a few hours! Well-done, my friend! Darn those devil days of summer.!

Nurul asked me for my opinion on this poem as a sonnet. BUT i am not a sonnet expert, so i give some definitions i found online: [i do not write sonnets] sonnet: 'From the Italian sonetto, which means “a little sound or song, ' the sonnet is a popular classical form that has compelled poets for centuries. Traditionally, the sonnet is a fourteen-line poem written in iambic pentameter, which employ one of several rhyme schemes and adhere to a tightly structured thematic organization. Two sonnet forms provide the models from which all other sonnets are formed: the Petrarchan and the Shakespearean.' - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i don't understand the use of brush (teeth?) or sacred. i have to do something else NOW, or i'll get in trouble with my mate. ha! ! i hope i remember to return here. remind me, please. bri :) i·am·bic pen·tam·e·ter nounProsody noun: iambic pentameter; plural noun: iambic pentameters iambic pentameter: a line of verse with five metrical feet, each consisting of one short (or unstressed) syllable followed by one long (or stressed) syllable, for example Two households, both alike in dignity. ==================== well, it DOES have 14 lines. ok. it does NOT seem (to me) to follow the 'rule' of five metrical feet (ten syllables) with appropriately-stressed syllables. i did NOT research the rhyme schemes suggested for sonnet form. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -