Thursday, July 6, 2023

Monsoon Shower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain has a lot to say
And it speaks its heart out
Leaving nothing to fantasy
Divulging all uncensored
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2023

The first four lines speak the whole thing that the poetess wants to express through this excellent poem. Excellent

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 08 July 2023

An outburst of sad storage. Good use of rain metaphor. May spring come fast in your Connection

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 July 2023

Bravo my comrade TFS

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2023

A beautiful poem full of metaphors and captivating images. Wonderful poetic expressions! Top Marks

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 July 2023

This poem came across at the right time of the season. So beautifully written

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M. Asim Nehal 07 July 2023

Truly, showers provide respite from warmth and happiness to each and every one of us just like your poems. Full *****

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Denis Mair 06 July 2023

An end to exile in the thin atmosphere! Such an orgiastic release, such anticipation of mud pies to be made!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 July 2023

Wow! ! This is beautifully written on rain. Loved it.

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3) A heartful appreciation from the Land on Monsoons.

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Short and impressive. Truly Nosheenic. Five stars and MyFavouritePoems.

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Brilliant poem on monsoon rains. Reminded me of poem named "Raathrimazha" (Rain in the night) by Malayalam poet of yesteryears, Sugathakumari.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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