Sunday, June 11, 2017

Monsoon Rains.. Comments

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Heavy rains… It's raining helter- skelter!
Unable to see beyond the courtyard;
Hardly hear anything other than the clatter..
Like pelting, on a tin roof.
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Rajnish Manga 12 June 2017

This is incredible- the way you have drawn the landscape during heavy monsoon rains. At the same time it reflects the lovely images of the past and longing for the Prince Charming. Thanks. Heavy rains of tears of desolation.... From the long summer of desertion, Soft fingers of reminiscence are clasping.... And flouncing, all over my body. I sense someone, whispering into my ears....

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Rini Shibu 11 June 2017

Beautiful poem on monsoon rains..

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