Thursday, April 27, 2006

Monsoon Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s the end of summer,
the sweltering heat,
makes human sweat in the night,
and makes the plants and trees,
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Jay P Narain
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Nice discription of the Monsoon, especially the southwest one, reminded me of home, i think S-W monsoons would have started!

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Sandra Fowler 28 April 2006

Wonderful, vivid imagery. The rain played this poem. I could hear the music. Kind regards, Sandra

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Elya Thorn 27 April 2006

Oh, you have made me feel so so much with those beautiful, amazing, gracefully done descriptions! I just felt everything, I was there.... This is such an amazing poem! ! It deserves so much! Beautifully constructed, this is the glory of poetry! ! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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