Monsoon Musings 08 - Vows Of Love Comments
A shower,
Basking in the embrace of earth, her lover,
with her quivering lips on his chest
Her body shivering against his,
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Thank you Puti for the lovely words of appreciation. Thank you for your precious time, as I know you are a quite busy person. Sorry that I noticed your post only now...
Her body shivering against his, whispers her vows of love Direct to his heart.......... touching expression full of romance. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
I am thrilled to your appreciation of this little poem. And monsoon is one season I enjoy. And, probably everybody does. I am reminded of Ritusamhaaram by Great Kaalidasa..
It is great feeling to see my small poems appreciated by talented poets like you dear. Obliged for the good words.
Love is like a summer rain shower.Unexpected, intense, quenching the thirst of the heart.Superb poem!
You got it right, friend. Love happens just like a summer shower, with not with a little cloud to warn you about its arrival. That is why you always are taken by surprise. You get drenched in it.. Thanks dear...
Love a beautiful emotions strong and intense absorbing every drop of love to quench the longing. Loved reading it.10++++ for drenching our souls with beautiful poem.
Thank you Aarzoo, for the wonderful observations. Deeply obliged. And thank you again for the 10+
A powerful poem of love. Very passionate. Beautifully crafted write.10
Thank you, Rose Marie, for devoting your precious time to read this poem and printing your appreciation. So glad that it is to your liking.
Thank you Rini. I feel, there is a heart to heart communication between rain and earth. During summer, the angst of earth’s longing for his lover, the rain, who can imagine!
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7/27/2025 3:58:18 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully sewn and very heartwarming! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Thank you Becca, for the loving kindness. Thank you.