Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Monsoon Musings 06 - Simran Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dawn
Little shower
Whispering her
Morning prayers
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 November 2020

Dawn Little shower Whispering her Morning prayers With the trees Joining the chorus............marvellous prayer........10

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 November 2020

Thank you, Geeta. The word “Simran” in Punjabi means “prayer “.

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Bipasha D 07 September 2020

Very soothing imagery! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 September 2020

Thank you, Bipasha for the lovely post. Exactly my feeling of being soothed of all excitement, while I penned the poem. Thanks.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2018

Breathtakingly beautiful! .. Heartfelt! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2018

Hi Becca, During monsoon, it rains incessantly in Kerala. And light showers in the morning are so lovely, with sun peeping through the tiny spaces between the dark rain clouds, painting bright little pics on your watery yard or windows, and coolness of the shower holds you in a sensuous hug, .... Oh! The feeling is ethereal.... Becca thank you...sooooooooooooo much.

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Rini Shibu 20 June 2018

Lovely poem and beautiful imagery

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 June 2018

Thank you Rini. May I request you to take time to read all the poems in the Monsoon series...

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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