Monsoon Fury In March! ! ! Comments
A birthing sun stretched,
outreach of golden fingers
Over the arch of
predawn's auburn wings
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The words are like magic.Charming and beautiful expression.Thanks for presenting such a lovely poem.
Thank you for your kind review and comments. I invite you to read my other poems, appreciate your feedback and review.
You have woven a beautiful magic with rich vocabulary in this write, Awesome. Keep inking.
Thank you Tikuji, I invite you to review my other poems especially Why Blame Me A Blood Moon, a little fanciful but nice and romantic.
Monsoon fury is a magic that suddenly changes peaceful atmosphere sure!
Thank you Ramesh, Monsoon magic sure does change an ordinary sunny day...one walks out seeking hidden rainbows in the horizon..
Charismatic write. Drops of water from the sky and a poetess to catch them in such picturesque phrase is delightful. This is a wonderful poem.
Thanks Rekha, Nothing like Rain to enhance the romance of a beautiful spring day
Verily, a lovely depiction of the rain in the short spring month of March............10
Thank you, I still fondly remember the magic that rain spun on our Mumbai land, a parched park in front outside my windows danced out in the rain...
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7/19/2025 3:11:25 AM # 1.0.0
too much and continuous can take away the fun but when it had been dry too long it's better than the sun lovely read-10