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Very good lines. Expressed beautiful thoughts. Good poem.

A wonderful read bringing the earthy smell right to my laptop. I loved the vignettes of the monsoons that you paint with such a keen sense of observation.

this must be the best poem i have read about the rains. i read it out to my family and we all smiled at the end............thanks for sharing

Mamta, I love this poem it brought such a smile to my face, with memories of the east, so vivid was it, I felt quite damp. Warm regards Bob 10++

monsoon at peak, brings unknown joy to get wet! lovely poem about wet slushy, mud, curling round your toes! beautiful poem mamta, about different aspects of monsoon.real good write.

Mamtaji is at peak About monsoon she left nothing unsaid Wow! This is just beautiful.....................

Wonderful, Mamta. You take me to another world. In the language of rain this one is beautiful. I can hear the raindrops. Love again, SandraX

An enjoyable read Mamta, monsoon effects everything

An enjoyable read Mamta, monsoon effects everything

moonsoon at peak is a nice title..it is supported by the lines you described inside the poem..naizz

Mamtaji, Monsoon at peak, Open your pen and write the rhythm of drops.

Nice poem ends with a subtle twist. very good.

A lovely poem! This is how true monsoon should always be! But this year due El Nino effect and heating of the waters over the Pacific, and lack of proper moisture feed, our Monsoon is playing hide & seek! 10! -Raj Nandy

Beautiful poem, Mamta. All stanzas seem to be drizzling in my memories. Monsoon is a bit late here in our area. For us this poem is a prologue to Monsoon. Regards Naseer

Bitter sweet songs of Monsoon. Varied perceptions. CP

Monsoon at peak, A boy steals a look At a girl soaked to skin…...........wonderful words yet sizzling through rain earth when soaked full to its brim by contentment, yet verdure wearing deep green, quite pleasing by the imagery,10++, thanks for sharing

I enjoyed the poem, mamta; especially because only today morning it has happened in our area. Monsoon is really at peak!

It looks like some of your stanza's were haiku structure. well done...beautiful poem! ! ! 10+++

a lighthearted rain...knows all the trouble it causes..right from leaks..pavement homes to wet linens...lovely write mam

very apt and timely................a smart one indeed.