Friday, June 6, 2008

Monsoon Arrives Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gathered clouds,
Make morning dark
The nature has bowed,
As the rain embarks…
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Aparna Mirajkar
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Rema Prasanna 30 June 2008

Monsoon arrives thru your lines in a way it finds it real arrival. good flow and a very fine write..... liked it Aparna 10 from me. Rgs Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 08 June 2008

the birth of monsoon...beautifully drawn with select wording lines *10*

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Rani Turton 06 June 2008

Thanks for this marvellous evocative monsoon poem.

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