Monday, June 14, 2010

Monsoon Comments

Rating: 4.8

Open your Heart,
Embrace the joy,
Raise your arms,
Welcome the great grey sky.
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Preetam Shetty
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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 26 June 2010

well said and well expressed! ! ! ! ! you really made it sound good and just for the record i love the rain season, so this piece reminded me of the rainy season and how it inspires me...... keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

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Matt Mooney 25 June 2010

A poem to put in your pocket and to read when you need wind in your sails.10.

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Gan Chennai 25 June 2010

'Feel the warmth, Even in the rains' - A Nice unimaginable imagination.

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Anita Trivedi 22 June 2010

My heart is smiling after readig this........ very beautiful................

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Ency Bearis 16 June 2010

Great poem to ponder, nice write and remarkable.

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Gita Ashok 16 June 2010

What a beautiful piece of work! It's filled to the brim and overflowing with optimism. Enjoyed it like I enjoy every little dropp of rain. Thanks for sharing.

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Hans Vr 15 June 2010

Where I grew people were endelessly complaining when it rained. What a change, an ode to the rain. This is a very good way of 'always look at the bright side of life'. I enjoyed reading it a lot. We always have a choice, just complain about rain or enjoy and look at it from the bright side. Thanks for sharing this great poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 June 2010

Enjoy the aroma, Of the soothing earth, Encounter the seeds, Taking a new birth. you are very grateful to God.. thank the divine love. i love your attitude in your poems. it is all fine and poetic.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 14 June 2010

Take a loved one, Walk through the lanes, Feel the warmth, Even in the rains. Common bolywood frame. Then poet you really enjoy now the monsoon. Forgot that experience of flood! Then be a stout dam to resist all the hazards of excessive rain. Give others to enjoy the cloud-melting blessings from the greater life through belief, love, friendship and....... Well-written love. Write more..... 10+ Apoet

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Amrit Rathi 14 June 2010

Very crisp description of coming rains! [Open your Heart, Embrace the joy, Raise your arms, Welcome the great grey sky.] voted 9/10

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The rejoice of new life to come! Open your heart, embrace the joy. An awakening poem. Well done; D

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 14 June 2010

very nice and just a great read...ienjoyed it....u talented

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Joseph Poewhit 14 June 2010

Words have a health to them

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Guy Baldwin 14 June 2010

i could feel the cool rain and the joy it brings through your well crafted words. good stuff!

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