! Monsoon! ! Comments

rain has this quality of influencing each in a unique way...i translated a short story on rain...it simply haunts...

I love the rain, superb.

what chases your song birds forcing you to nest them in? rain or black clouds? rain doesn't fit there that good, for rain is welcome to you, you want to shower in it...or is that you prefer here not to see your song birds drenched? bit confusing... the poem addresses rain...so 'you chase' means 'rain chases'... i would prefer 'your black shadows chase' or some thing like that... a poem otherwise well worded well written...despite this the poem, ten grade...

yet beautiful flow of words by the imagery of nature making all symmetrical and scintillating with little confusion of black clouds again, the monsoon when cuddles the drems, unique expression of ingenuity, well penned, thanks for sharing

Very well-expressed. The imagery speaks to the reader. Thanks.

A poetic rain.Well done Rema.10

A shower of unique but cannily mixed metaphors spreads delight throughout this piece. A metaphoric feast in monsoonal munificence! Rgds, Ivan

Wonderful poem Rema, sounds like my home, always dark clouds and rain... Andrew 10

really wonderful poem by the monsoon yet of unique genre rain razzling on the dream, heart revels by the pure earth, yet mystque rain when respires, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

If i may copy a line from your poem I like your melancholic rhythm of this poem...nice work!

I remember awaiting the monsoons eagerly to gain relief from heoppressive lead up tp them.Your writing brought back many memories of the years I spent in Malaya as ayoung man. I too liked the drumming of the rin on rooftops like an excited heart beat

Wow! mesmerising! I felt marigolds, mountains and greens in my room. Heartfelt 10

anothor gem of a write from your creative corner

Rema, this is really awesome.

I like the imageries that you pursue one to have in their mind, theyre really great. If you have time please read some of my work too and rate it and/or comment it. Constructive criticism is welcome as well, offcourse. Thankyou and keep it up, Kilian

i find monsoons have a special magic of their own, and like Indira says, its melancholic when it brings floods and causes havoc. a beautiful composition, with lovely evocative images.10+ Please read magic of monsoons and monsoon magic when time permits

Without this regular melancholic rhythm from the Sky where can anyone enjoy mirthfulness in the bosom of mother Earth? Wonderful timely Nature poem!

Rain is melodious, harmonious.Its meloncholic pattern is only when it pours in thunderbolt and floods.But even then there's a pleasing rhythm to the musical ears. Good write.