Monorhyme Poem: Fog Of Life Comments

Nice try. I too write in Monorhyme. I named it Pari Style of writing poetry. I deal with personal subject. In my style rhetorical devices are added. My personal emotions are dealt with and many a times the topic is a person. If possible, Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style. Your view is encouragement for me & Pari Style.

good poem in the celestial race.