Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Monologue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love's ashes blown
By the wind of time;
Consumed in flames,
Now, —chastity her senses.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2018

She casts my thoughts away, But I guide them in the present, And in a smile I catch myself again… This little game I play! A glimpse into the moment and around, Brings back myself to Now........so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem on love nicely executed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

Love and pain! ! She now lays in apathy. Thanks for sharing.

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Dimitrios Galanis 15 December 2015

Ωραίο κι αυτό, πολλές οι εικονοποιήσεις των αισθημάτων.Οι δυο τελευταίοι στίχοι πάλι ό, τι χρειάζεται για να το κλείσουν ως επίλογος με την αίσθηση της πληρότητας από την ανάγνωση.

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