Monday, October 19, 2015

Monolith Comments

Rating: 5.0

Monolith, oh Monolith
I hope you’re here to stay.
Your glorious reality
Won’t let me turn away.
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Brian Mayo
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Wes Vogler 25 November 2015

Like I said, the guy's a nut. But I got a giggle. and a 10

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Simone Inez Harriman 08 November 2015

I am impressed with your poem Brian. Ancient to present day the monolith has always drawn mystery and reverence. Your poem captures the essence of elevated influence and significance. Loved it....10

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Brian Mayo 25 November 2015

gosh... thanks, Simone. :)

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Mantu Mahakul 01 November 2015

Monolith, oh Monolith I hope you’re here to stay....Really reality based glory this conveys in this interesting invitation based poem shared here. Nice motive is highlighted....Wonderful...10

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Neran Sati 23 October 2015

One of my favorite, a brilliant metaphor of man's adoration serving the ambition!

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