Wednesday, June 23, 2021

Monoku ~ Sacrifice Comments

Rating: 5.0

The greed of every human stands naked when it come to sacrifice.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Unnikrishnan E S 27 February 2022

Indian philosophy promotes sacrifice and giving as a most important virtue. In theory, yes. But in practice, none. Greed bares its fangs, the moment you starts to speak ‘sacrifice'… lovely poem

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Indira Renganathan 27 February 2022

Superb write on a rational truth.....full score

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I liked it, wisely thought.

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Varsha M 24 June 2021

True words. Well said. There is no end yo greed but when it comes to sacrifice there is no mask to hide this greed.

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Sacrifice is a far cry......Brilliant Monoku with top stars dear Asim ji

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Greed is the biggest hurdle for anything good and noble.

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Monoku - a marvellous one liner poem

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Michael Jack 23 June 2021

The greed of every human stands naked when it come to sacrifice.

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Ricky Magnathen 23 June 2021

Fabulous poem.

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