Monoku # 01 Comments
Death is
satisfaction; silence of
immortal soul
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you have the sharpness of the human mind not many can boast of why stop read my poems moms smiles and mothers day today be carried away into the realms of time one day some day you will remeber poets of my kind who lead you the line of immortality as far as it concerns poetry read more than many views will germinate and then from your within genes will emanate and take the worlds progeny ahead there is no road end yet
Thanks a lot Dear Poet The Poet Poet for your reading and valuable comment
Only those who have deeply thought about the temporal life of the humans face death with smile. For others death is still somewhat a cruel giant.
A great poem that captures death and immortality of soul. '' Death is expiration of earthly body; Ecstasy of soul.'' Wonderful lines of a great poem.10
Thanks a lot Dear Poetess Rose Marie Juan-austin for your valuable comment
This great poem is divided into four blocks! You have brilliantly depicted the reality! I liked the optimistic third block (stanza) most! Wonderful power of creativity! I see a promising literary future in you! I would love to read more of your creative works! I vote this fabulous piece of poetry with a 10
Thanks a lot Dear Poet Dr. Dillip K Swain for your reading and valuable comment
It's a great spiritual expression on the birth, death and the mysterious flow of soul. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful poem with us.+++10
Dear Poet Chandan Dey you are really so kind within your words. Thanks a lot for your comment
Death is such a difficult subject but you have handled it well in this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Really a poignant rendition set aside for sober reflection. A beautiful creation crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance, and spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Britte and do remain enriched.
The heavenly soul, the earthly body if walk side by side in a moderate way, it's a very good life. I think there is no need of killing our instincts, just respond to the call of instincts within the centuries old established customs and taboos. It's a thoughtful poem.
I kill my earthly rule of body to get godly soul.....controlling one's own self to achieve greatness........ discovering the mystery of God and God's creation...... thank u dear poet. love ur poem. Tony
Birth! ! Life and death! Facing Natural Laws. Thanks for sharing.
Well monoku on death and immortality of soul, thanks for sharing the poem, + 10
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7/20/2025 9:59:04 PM # 1.0.0
great poem; great 10++++++++++++++