Friday, August 21, 2009

Monochrome Moments Comments

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A dropp of rain falls on her face
As she stands upon the shore
Wild wind tangles in her hair
As the storm breaks over her
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Fiona Davidson
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Sue Sie 22 August 2009

Fabulous....just fabulous writing....what more can I say! ! ! Sue x

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2009

This has to be one of your best Fi... - - it could well be the start of a short story - - full of impassioned imagery..... great little piece..... Fay

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

fantastic fi extremly beautiful going into my favs

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 August 2009

The power and electricity of x-treme imagery...Priceless....Vey nicely done, mon ami! FjR

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