Sunday, May 12, 2019

Monkeys Minus Tail Comments

Rating: 5.0

If peacocks and cuckoos us regale,
If parrots please our heart,
Butterflies-beasts apart,
There's a zoo in all us without fail,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bharati Nayak 18 May 2019

There's a zoo in all us without fail, For sure monkeys are we minus tail! - - _______________________________________ A nice limerick Yes, .I agree.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 May 2019

Thanks indeed for liking the limerick. Have you noticed, we often like some limericks without agreeing with what is said?

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

And yes, 'poem of euphemism', you have given it a right nomenclature.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 May 2019

Member: Indira Renganathan Comment: Indeed a beautiful poem of euphemism....very interesting...great work 10++++++ - - A ditty of light stuff, but many of my limericks try to tell something. Thank you for the liberal rating.

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Indira Renganathan 16 May 2019

Indeed a beautiful poem of euphemism....very interesting...great work 10++++++

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Valsa George 14 May 2019

Certainly we are monkeys minus tails! The animal instincts are there in man. Some refine these instincts. Some never bother to refine themselves and are animals in essence though they live in homes and not in jungles! A beautiful satire!

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 May 2019

Thanks indeed, Let 'beautiful' be the satire, But muse is on mankind entire.

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What an amazing limerick. A very perceptive poem and amazingly humorous. Loved the witty statement of the great Poet in the Poet's Notes.10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 May 2019

Exactly, it is a tongue-in-cheek kind of ditty, emphasis on humour, Yet, however, sometimes I wonder if evolution has stopped as a process with mankind. Man is supposed to evolve to be worthy of the spark he has come from.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 May 2019

certainly man is an animal..................// sometimes it seems to me Charles Robert Darwin was right

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 May 2019

Yes, but he talked about progressive evolution, man often proves him wrong with his regressive tendencies.

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