Friday, September 23, 2016

Monkeys -5 (Politics Of The Day- Series) Comments

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The Kilo-class ruled over villages,
In the suburbs of towns
Where Dogs and ATM cards
Had no meaning at all.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

The monkeys Had their own apes, Called Personal Apes, P.A. Trained from the nearby Towns, Taught by them to serve The subjects Who loved these monkeys, Yet, lived like Donkeys. Beautiful comparison with these funny animals. Thanks for this touchy poem 10+++

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Thanks dear Rimi for your lovely remarks.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 05 November 2017

It took an hour or two To make them gather around you Garlands, Goats, School Girls... And a few loud speakers Make them work for you. What a naked truth so nicely penned. 10+++

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Thanks dear Sheath for your lovely remarks

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Anita Aparajita Das 10 September 2017

You speak and they clap And clap and clap and clap Till yours are completely inaudible. And you are declared the winner Before any match is played. Nicely penned poem. Tyhanks Subhas. 10++

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Thanks dear Meeting for your lovely remarks

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Sabita Sahoo 03 October 2016

You speak and they clap And clap and clap and clap Till yours are completely inaudible. And you are declared the winner Before any match is played. Beautiful satire on politicians. Thanks for sharing it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 September 2016

The monkeys Had their own apes, Called Personal Apes, P.A. Trained from the nearby Towns, Taught by them to serve The subjects Who loved these monkeys, Yet, lived like Donkeys. Beautiful comparison with these funny animals. Thanks for this touchy poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 September 2016

Every other political system is as mockery as the monkey and donkey of ours! ! very interesting poem on politics.Thank you for sharing your thought here..

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Thanks a million for the kind visit to my page and for the real readership.

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