Monkeys -1 (Politics Of The Day- Series) Comments

Beautiful satire Then there was a need For walls and doors, For roofs and floors, For boxes and locks To protect and store. The age and days of Monkeys were About to close. Nice work Sir. 10++++++ for the sharing.

Beautiful satire Then there was a need For walls and doors, For roofs and floors, For boxes and locks To protect and store. The age and days of Monkeys were About to close. Nice work Sir. 10++++

For walls and doors, For roofs and floors, For boxes and locks To protect and store. The age and days of Monkeys were About to close. 10+++ for the sharing.

Long before Jainism They learnt to hide What was real and natural and true. And they learnt to reveal What was termed art, culture, And civilization afterwards Although they were but artificial. Lovelypoem to adore. Artistic. 10++++

They learned... They earned... They possessed.... They assessed.... Then there was a need For walls and doors, For roofs and floors, For boxes and locks To protect and store. The age and days of Monkeys were About to close. Nicely aimed at. Thanks.

I enjoyed the structure of this poem- - loved the gathering momentum of They learned... They earned... They possessed.... They assessed.... - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -and the brilliant contrasting of the beginning stanza with the closing stanza. Very well written. 10. [10 is the # I am selecting- hope that fits in with their new scoring system]