Monkey Mind Comments

Slowing down the restless mind Can help realize the wholeness of being Mindfulness stills the mind Deepens our clarity Calms our anxieties...the simile of the broken glass pieces and the mindfulness which makes us calm......... you use the technique of contrasts very effectively here dear poet. tony

A Beautiful poem with great message. Very true said, man is never satisfied with whatever he has, and he craves for more and more. It becomes very necessary to tame our monkey mind to lead a peaceful life. Beautiful presentation. Loved it.

A foolish monkey mind always tries to imitate, Imitation is a devise of learning but when overoptimism dominates it becomes a headache.............10

yes, our mind like a clear portrait adorned with colors of wishes, joy, pain...........brilliant work.....thanks

if we focus on what we lack, we miss out on the precious things we possess. great write, Deepak.

But the funny mind thinks thoughts infinite in musing lonely. Very beautiful presentation and orientation of poem is excellent. Each line transfers and each stanza transfers a very nice message. But whatever may be mindfulness stills the mind. Outstanding poem shared in forum.

Slowing down the restless mind Can help realize the wholeness of being Mindfulness stills the mind Deepens our clarity Calms our anxieties We thirst for more and more and in our quest to satisfy our thirsts, we only grow more restless! Man has to learn to tame his monkey mind! Then only he can be at peace with himself! Enjoyed the poem much!

Nice poem with beautiful title-words are jerky- Slowing down the restless mind Can help realize the wholeness of being thank you

Nice poem with beautiful title-words are jerky- Slowing down the restless mind Can help realize the wholeness of being thank you