Thursday, August 15, 2013

Monika Comments

Rating: 4.7

Monika
Rainbows are fantasies,
Of an anaemic sun.
If only our eyes were prisms
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Madhup Mohta
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Ramesh Rai 22 October 2013

Monika Poems Are promises Of passion. If only, we had read Each word would have promised Inevitable pain

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Miroslava Odalovic 22 October 2013

This is a beautiful poem, glad you highlighted it and entered the contest I'd probably have no chance to read it otherwise. Whatever its outcomes I am sure it'll be ingrained in many readers' memory.

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Tushar Bhatia 18 October 2013

True and beautiful Nice one

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Amar Nadeem 18 October 2013

Beautiful! Compels to ponder over.

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Sarvjeet Soodan 18 October 2013

So true, so beautiful...

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Rakesh Kalra 18 October 2013

Excellent & touchy, , , , , , What an imagination

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Romi Mittal 18 October 2013

Sensitive, with a touch of poignancy! The imagination is lucidly vivid! A poem that can be 'felt'..A beautiful ode to unfulfilled emotions! ! Madhup..kudos! ...

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Deepak Angad Jain 18 October 2013

Very very nice n written truely n honestly... Ur imagination is realy mind blowing... Realy amazzzing, , :)

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Meenakshi Tiwari 18 October 2013

very elegant... and beautiful Monika every word has it's own story ... nice combination of science and nature...... indeed a beautiful and marvellous picture comes into mind while reading Monika.... pleasant feeling..... it serves...... Lovely composition...... (y)

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Yashaswi Chauhan 18 October 2013

monika is b'fully written.....by reading dis....i realized dat ur imagination is travelling at speed of light......u r many light years ahead! ! ! it means(in physics) dat ur imagination is beyond any time frame...how can i reach there to understand wat r u feeling abt. dis world....u r very very far(beyond reach) ...pls keep writing for us

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 17 October 2013

Dear Madhup, your poem will definitely touch a chord in many people's heart. It was lovely and enjoyable reading. Keep up the good work! Wish you all the best for the contest. You may win a prize - who knows! ! But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)

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Arvinder Suri 28 September 2013

Superb! ! ! Reading it once or twice was not enough! ! ! Seen your love for Monika in your eyes... you've penned it n i could see the same love filled eyes all over again! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 23 September 2013

Oh Monika! i gaze your beauty. beautifully versed.

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Kanchan Pathak 20 September 2013

Words from the depth of heart! Beautiful composition, full of emotions....

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Manisha Rathi 20 September 2013

Beautiful, moving, worth thinking about.....

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Abhilash Fraizer 20 September 2013

it is beautiful piece of writing!

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Tushta Gandhi 19 September 2013

Wow.... beautiful poem! Reading it once is just not enough. Dreams are facts, Of life lived after-hours. If only, we were awake Each wish would come true In the moment of its conception....... lovely! !

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Niraj Grover 19 September 2013

Your love for Monika is enshrined in this poem...this poem i enshrine in my memory for it's sheer poetical beauty.....poem of such beauty is kudo itself...wish i could write a piece of poetry as fresh and beautiful...God bless you.

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Shyam Sunder Sharma 19 September 2013

Beautiful! Very poignant! Thank you. I love it!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 August 2013

good write Monika, thanks, I like it.

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Madhup Mohta

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