Monday, October 19, 2015

Money Talks! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When time bound life race through strife’s;
When comrades tune to blow their horns;
And money in tons is the element that talks;
Laughter turns to snuffle And Smiles to sneers;
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ROOP REKHA BHASKAR
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2015

Money can make one dance! Nice work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2015

Money can make one dance!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2015

Mooney screams, money dreams, its touch, an ecstasy! Money fights, fists and mind – Finally falls, with no victory. Money buys - Love and hate, and money rocks the inner devil; Money talks- ‘Love me not, use me well, I’m the root of all evil! ’ ney screams, money dreams, its touch, an ecstasy! Money fights, fists and mind – Finally falls, with no victory.- - - -Well envisioned and nicely depicted. Money roles good or evil as per the handling of the person. So we should properly handle it. An intensive poem I like most. - - 10 Money buys - Love and hate, and money rocks the inner devil; Money talks- ‘Love me not, use me well, I’m the root of all evil! ’

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Amitava Sur 24 October 2015

Reading this long poem with vivid detailing and description my realization I express through few lines of one of my poems as - Money is like an innocent baby, if you love and nurture it properly The baby will be grown healthily to a decent child If you indulge by excessive love and affection The baby will grow to a pampered and unruly problem child. Exactly in the same way if money is not managed properly with a long term vision and goal Money will behave destructively, it will erupt and explode. Otherwise money will definitely protect you And ensure shelter and position in life........................... Thanks

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Valsa George 20 October 2015

The world is in a rat race for making money! Hoarding wealth has become the be- all and end - all of life! Those who are so avaricious for worldly gains must read this poem and the message it conveys! Of course money is needed to lead a reasonably comfortable life! But when it becomes a frenzied obsession, it takes away the inner joy and life will cease to be one of unhealthy competition and open or hidden rivalry! A kind deed is noble when buried in your heart. A kind word more virtuous not when mouthed aloud. A kind thought shines bright when in your soul it sounds; That is all you take when this world you depart.......................... What austere attitude and what shining wisdom! A 10

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Liza Sudina 19 October 2015

very hard question for all humanity, I like that you are so devoted! 10+++

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